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You are organizing a part write a letter to invite your friends

Dear Bob, I haven’t heard from you in a long time and hope that all is well with you. Anyway, you will be glad to know that I have got a job offer from one of the leading telecommunication companies, and I will be starting the new job after a couple of weeks from now. You will also be happy to know that I am going to hold a party to celebrate this great occasion of getting a “new job” on the 18th of February next month. Please be present at the party and make it even more special. My family members and some of our old-time university friends, like Peter, Jonson and Raul, are expected to be present at the party also. I have already invited 25 guests and most of them are friends and family. I hope, you haven’t forgotten the direction to come to my place. But, in case if you don’t have the direction with you, here it is once again- first, take the M12 highway, drive about 2 hours until you hit the Jupiter Street. Turn right on Jupiter and pass a few signal lights until you reach the Victoria shopping mall, and my home is right behind the mall a couple of blocks away. Just call me if you have trouble finding my place. I look forward to seeing you at the party. Warm wishes, Louis Ferguson
Dear Bob,

I haven’t heard from you in a long time and hope that all is well with you. Anyway, you will be glad to know that I have
got
a job offer from one of the leading telecommunication
companies
, and I will be starting the new job after a couple of weeks from
now
. You will
also
be happy to know that I am going to hold a party to celebrate this great occasion of getting a “new job” on the 18th of February
next
month.
Please
be present at the party and
make
it even more special.

My family members and
some
of our
old
-time university friends, like Peter, Jonson and Raul, are
expected
to be present at the party
also
. I have already invited 25 guests and most of them are friends and family.

I hope, you haven’t forgotten the direction to
come
to my place.
But
, in case if you don’t have the direction with you, here it is once again-
first
, take the M12 highway, drive about 2 hours until you hit the Jupiter Street. Turn right on Jupiter and pass a few signal lights until you reach the Victoria shopping mall, and my home is right behind the mall a couple of blocks away.
Just
call me if you have trouble finding my place.

I look forward to seeing you at the party.

Warm wishes,

Louis Ferguson
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IELTS letter You are organizing a part write a letter to invite your friends

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
232 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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