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Dear Stefanie, How have you been? I’ve been doing pretty well lately. Due to the workloads from my office, I haven’t been in touch with anybody for a while now. I’m planning on visiting Sussex by the end of this month. If you are free then I think we should catch up and relive our old days. It’s been a while since I spent some quality time with my friends and family. Since you were one of my closest friends I thought it’d best if you could come join me and my family. The kids will be thrilled to see you. I’ve been assigned as the team leader for a project from my office and yesterday the project finally got finalized. Now I have some free time to spend with friends and family and the family insisted on visiting Sussex. So if you can make it it’d great. I was thinking firstly we could go back to our high school where we first met. It’s been a while since we paid a visit there. It would be great to see some of our old teachers there. It’s going to bring back a lot of no

Dear Stefanie, How have you been? I’ve been doing pretty well lately. Due to the workloads from my office, I haven’t been in touch with anybody for a while now. I’m planning on visiting Sussex by the end of this month. If you are free then I think we should catch up and relive our old days. It’s been a while since I spent some quality time with my friends and family. Since you were one of my closest friends I thought it’d best if you could come join me and my family. The kids will be thrilled to see you. I’ve been assigned as the team leader for a project from my office and yesterday the project finally got finalized. Now I have some free time to spend with friends and family and the family insisted on visiting Sussex. So if you can make it it’d great. I was thinking firstly we could go back to our high school where we first met. It’s been a while since we paid a visit there. It would be great to see some of our old teachers there. It’s going to bring back a lot of no gooL
Dear Stefanie, How have you been? I’ve been doing pretty well lately. Due to the workloads from my office, I haven’t been in touch with anybody for a while now. I’m planning on visiting Sussex by the end of this month. If you are free then I think we should catch up and relive our old days. It’s been a while since I spent some quality time with my friends and family. Since you were one of my closest friends I thought it’d best if you could come join me and my family. The kids will be thrilled to see you. I’ve been assigned as the team leader for a project from my office and yesterday the project finally got finalized. Now I have some free time to spend with friends and family and the family insisted on visiting Sussex. So if you can make it it’d great. I was thinking firstly we could go back to our high school where we first met. It’s been a while since we paid a visit there. It would be great to see some of our old teachers there. It’s going to bring back a lot of nostalgic days for sure. Secondly I thought we could go for a picnic at the countryside. I’ve missed cycling a lot, more importantly I’ve missed how I beat you every time we got into a cycle race. I think the fresh air will help the children come in close touch with the nature and also bring back our old days at the countryside. Finally, I was thinking of catching up on one of the latest movies that will release in a couple of days. I’ve been dying to see Leonardo DiCaprio’s new work. We could also go for some shopping if you’re interested because I need to shake up my wardrobe. All of this is possible if you agree and have some spare time. I’m very excited to visit Sussex and spending my leisure time. I have so many things to say and except the same from you. Please write me back if you are up with the plan. Give my regards to your family. Take care of yourself and hopefully see you soon! Sincerely yours, Tashrif
Dear Stefanie,

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think
we should catch up and relive our
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days. It’s been a while since I spent
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quality
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with my friends and
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. Since you were one of my closest friends I
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free
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insisted on visiting Sussex.
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we could go
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to our high school where we
first
met. It’s been a while since we paid a visit there. It would be great to
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see
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teachers there.
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’s going to bring
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back
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a lot of
nostalgic days for sure.
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I
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thought
we could go for a picnic at the countryside. I’ve missed cycling a lot, more
importantly
I’ve missed how I beat you every
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time
we
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got
into a cycle race. I
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think
the fresh air will
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help
the children
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come
in close touch with the nature and
also
bring
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back
our
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old
days at the countryside.
Finally
, I was thinking of catching up on one of the latest movies that will release in a couple of days. I’ve been dying to
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see
Leonardo DiCaprio’s new work. We could
also
go for
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some
shopping if you’re interested
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because
I need to shake up my wardrobe.

All of this is possible if you
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agree
and have
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some
spare
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time
. I’m
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excited to visit Sussex and spending my leisure
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time
. I have
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things to say and except the same from you.
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write me
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back
if you are up with the plan. Give my regards to your
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family
. Take care of yourself and
hopefully
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see
you
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!

Sincerely
yours,

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Tashrif
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IELTS letter Dear Stefanie, How have you been? I’ve been doing pretty well lately. Due to the workloads from my office, I haven’t been in touch with anybody for a while now. I’m planning on visiting Sussex by the end of this month. If you are free then I think we should catch up and relive our old days. It’s been a while since I spent some quality time with my friends and family. Since you were one of my closest friends I thought it’d best if you could come join me and my family. The kids will be thrilled to see you. I’ve been assigned as the team leader for a project from my office and yesterday the project finally got finalized. Now I have some free time to spend with friends and family and the family insisted on visiting Sussex. So if you can make it it’d great. I was thinking firstly we could go back to our high school where we first met. It’s been a while since we paid a visit there. It would be great to see some of our old teachers there. It’s going to bring back a lot of no

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