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Letter writing by Mahiat Tabassum Mollah 82 Oxford Street London England 27.12.2020

Letter writing by Mahiat Tabassum Mollah 82 Oxford Street London England 27. 12. 2020 2ppj

Dear Stephanie, How are you? I hope you doing are well. I have been very busy lately with work. That's why i have lost touched with everyone. I am planning to visit Nottingham this weekend. If you have some spare time, then I guess we should catch up. My sudden plan to Nottingham is just to get some fresh air and to catch up with my family and friends. Due to workload I could not even get some spare time in these past weekends. Lately I have been working in a new project about the new water treatment plant. The project recently got finalized. So finally I got a small break. Nottingham was the best option for me to spend my break as you all and my family is here. On the other hand you are my dearest friend, so I want spend some time & relive our old memories with you. If you can make it. Firstly I was thinking of visiting our school, as its been quiet a while that we've been there. Our school is the place were we all friends first met! Second of all we both definitely go to park, I really miss magical smell of the flowers and cycling with you over there. Lastly and mainly I really want to go to the mall with you. We both could do our winter shopping, watch the new Marvel movie, play our favorite games in the gaming zone and have some delicious food in the food court. All of this is possible if you agree and have some spare time. I am even excited at the thought of coming to Nottingham and spending the break. I have to tell you lots of things and except the same from you. Please write me back if you are up with the plan. Give my regards to your family. Take care of yourself and hopefully see you soon! Yours lovingly, Mahiat

Dear Stephanie,

How are you? I hope Did you mean "you're doing", "you are doing", or "you were doing"?you're doingyou are doingyou were doing
you doing
 are well. I have been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 busy lately with work. That's why Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have lost touched with everyone.

I am planning to visit Nottingham this weekend. If you have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 spare You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
, then I guess we should catch up. My sudden plan to Nottingham is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fresh air and to catch up with my family and friends. Due to workload I could not even This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 spare You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 in these past weekends. Lately I have been working in a new project about the new water treatment plant. The project recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 finalized. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
finally
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 break. Nottingham was the best option for me to spend my break as you all and my family is here. On the other hand
 you are my dearest friend, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I Probably a preposition is missing after 'want'.want to spend
want spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 & relive our This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 memories with you. If you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it.

Firstly
 I was thinking of visiting our school, as Did you mean "it's" (="it has") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?it'sit has
its
 been Did you mean "quite"? 'quiet' means 'silent', 'quite' mean 'very' or 'to a moderate extent'quite
quiet
 a while that we've been there. Our school is the place were we all The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "friend"friend
friends
first
 met! Second of all we both definitely go to park, I really
 miss magical smell of the flowers and cycling with you over there. Lastly
 and mainly
 I really
 want to go to the mall with you. We both could do our winter shopping, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 the new Marvel movie, play our favorite games in the gaming zone and have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 delicious food in the food court.

All of this is possible if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 and have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 spare You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
. I am even excited at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 of coming to Nottingham and spending the break. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you lots of things and except the same from you. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 write me back if you are up with the plan. Give my regards to your family. Take care of yourself and hopefully
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
!

Yours lovingly
,

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