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recline a birthday partyvfor aclose friend

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To my closest and best friend, dear Mohammad Hi, what's up, bro? Long time no see! I suppose that It's a blessing that you are my honest and confidant friend. I am always obsessed with you sincerely. Candidly, I would be really grateful that you invite me for your birthday party, and I am delighted wholeheartedly for this. Unfortunately I want to say that I won't be able to participate in this great event. Hope that you would forgive me for this matter. To tell you the truth, I must travel to abroad for an occupational mission on scheduled time. Although, I wish I could be able to participate at this significant occasion and celebrate together. I am sure that we could have been created pure and memorable moments beside each other. It's on me to arrange to visit you at a decent time in the near future, in order to compensate for this excuse. By the way, I consider buying an amazing gift in overseas for your belated birthday feast. In advance, I want to offer my best and sincere wishes to you; I wish that you be indulged with health, wealth, happiness, and prosperity. May all of your aspirations and dramas come into reality. God bless you. You're faithfully
To my closest and best friend, dear Mohammad

Hi, what's up, bro? Long time no
see
! I suppose that It's a blessing that you are my honest and confidant friend. I am always obsessed with you
sincerely
.

Candidly
, I would be
really
grateful that you invite me for your birthday party, and I
am delighted
wholeheartedly
for this. Unfortunately I want to say that I won't be able to participate in this great
event
. Hope that you would forgive me for this matter.

To
tell
you the truth, I
must
travel to abroad for an occupational mission on scheduled time. Although, I wish I could be able to participate at this significant occasion and celebrate together. I am sure that we could have
been created
pure and memorable moments beside each other.

It's on me to arrange to visit you at a decent time in the near future, in order to compensate for this excuse. By the way, I consider buying an amazing gift in overseas for your belated birthday feast.

In advance, I want to offer my best and sincere wishes to you; I wish that you
be indulged
with health, wealth, happiness, and prosperity. May all of your aspirations and dramas
come
into reality. God bless you.

You're
faithfully
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7 paragraphs
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6.5
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