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You are going on a short training course at a college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter: explain your situation describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it

Hi HY, As per our discussion today, we will delete Air Drier (D-6301A/B/C) in the equipment list Air Compressor/Dryer Package (4-0301). Atlas Copco advised there are no Air Drier within the package. Air Drier is considered an integrated part of the Air Compressor. The integrated drier in the package is Dryer Rotor (K-6304A/B/C) which is considered heat exchanger with a heater element. See below how the Dryer Rotor is shown in vendor PEFS.
Hi HY,

As per our discussion
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
, we will delete
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Air
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Drier
(D-6301A/B/C) in the equipment list
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Air
Compressor/Dryer Package (4-0301). Atlas
Possible spelling mistake found.
Copco
advised there are no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Air
Possible agreement error. Did you mean “driers”?
Drier
within the package.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Air
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Drier
is considered
an integrated part of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Air
Compressor.

The integrated
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drier
in the package is Dryer Rotor (K-6304A/B/C) which
is considered
heat exchanger with a heater element.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
See
below how the Dryer Rotor
is shown
in vendor
Possible spelling mistake found.
PEFS
.
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IELTS letter You are going on a short training course at a college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter: explain your situation describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
73 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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