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You are going on a short training course at a college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter: Explain your situation describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it

You are going on a short training course at a college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter: Explain your situation describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it GE9B
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to seek help from you in order to arrange accommodation near college Greenmount, North Ireland. I am vikas kanda, and professionally I am an accountant. I have been in this profession for 10 years. My company offered me a training course at college Greenmount for one month. Due to hectic work schedule and lack of personal contact, I found it difficult to arrange accommodation. As such, I would like to request you to find suitable place for me. Well in case of adjustment, I am very cooperative: however, in case of living I am very reserved. I am looking for one bedroom apartment with separate kitchen and bathroom. Preferably, it will be close to the training venue. Most importantly, my company provides me budget of $1500 specially for accommodation. So, arrangements should be accordingly. I will land on 02April by 9 in the morning, and I will be at accommodation office as soon as possible to collect keys and fulfil rest formalities. I am hoping an optimistic feedback from you. Yours Faithfully, Vikas kanda
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to seek
help
from you in order to arrange
accommodation
near college
Greenmount
, North Ireland.

I am
vikas
kanda
, and
professionally
I am an accountant.
I
have been in this profession for 10 years. My
company
offered me a training course at college
Greenmount
for one month. Due to hectic work schedule and lack of personal contact, I found it difficult to arrange
accommodation
. As such, I would like to request you to find suitable place for me.

Well in case of adjustment, I am
very
cooperative:
however
, in case of living I am
very
reserved. I am looking for
one bedroom
apartment with separate kitchen and bathroom.
Preferably
, it will be close to the training venue. Most
importantly
, my
company
provides me budget of $1500
specially
for
accommodation
.
So
, arrangements should be
accordingly
.

I will land on 02April by 9 in the morning, and I will be at
accommodation
office as
soon
as possible to collect keys and fulfil rest formalities.

I am hoping an optimistic feedback from you.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Vikas
kanda
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IELTS letter You are going on a short training course at a college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter: Explain your situation describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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