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Your next-door neighbor owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbor requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: – Your reason for writing – What you would like to happen – A nice, respectful style

Your next-door neighbor owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbor requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: – Your reason for writing – What you would like to happen – A nice, respectful style jRRXM
Dear Martin, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction caused by your dog. While our neighborhood itself is calm and silent. Your dog has become intolerable making my family almost impossible to live. To be more precise, Last week, your dog seems to bark throughout the day and night. Due to this we were unable to sleep, and it was torment to our entire family! I hope your aware that there are old people and children in my home. This completely disturbed them. I request you to kindly take an immediate action as it is creating unnecessary nuisance. Since I had owned a dog previously, I would like to suggest you consult a doctor for your dog. Consistent barking helps me to understand that your dog is unwell. Besides, I would be able to refer one the top veterinary doctors in our town. I would be grateful, if you could overlook this issue as soon as possible. Thank you for your consideration, Yours sincerely, Nancy
Dear Martin,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction caused by your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dog
. While our neighborhood itself is calm and silent. Your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dog
has become intolerable making my family almost impossible to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
.

To be more precise, Last week, your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dog
seems to bark throughout the day and night. Due to this we were unable to sleep, and it was torment to our entire family! I hope your aware that there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
and children in my home. This completely disturbed them.

I request you to kindly take an immediate action as it is creating unnecessary nuisance. Since I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
owned
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dog
previously, I would like to suggest you consult a doctor for your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dog
. Consistent barking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
me to understand that your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dog
is unwell.
Besides
, I would be able to refer one the top veterinary doctors in our town. I would be grateful, if you could overlook this issue as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.

Thank you for your consideration,

Yours
sincerely
,

Nancy
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IELTS letter Your next-door neighbor owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbor requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: – Your reason for writing – What you would like to happen – A nice, respectful style

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6.5
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