Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter, say why you are writing describe your interest to work as an English teacher explain why you would be a suitable teacher for that community college

You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter, say why you are writing describe your interest to work as an English teacher explain why you would be a suitable teacher for that community college AjgPN
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my interest in the teacher position. I saw your advert in the local newspaper, which mentioned that you are looking for an English teacher for the night shift. Although, I have been looking for this kind of opportunity for a long time because my current job company going to shut down, due to some financial issue. Now that you are offering such a great opportunity, I want to grab this with both hands. In support of my eligibility, I have a bachelor's degree in education and I also completed some grammar courses and I have been teaching an English subject at a local school as a part-time tutor for the last 1 year. I would like to provide my services to your college if you could give me a chance. Look forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully. Mark Hill.
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my interest in the teacher position. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
your advert in the local newspaper, which mentioned that you are looking for an English teacher for the night shift. Although, I have been looking for this kind of opportunity for a long time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
job
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
going to shut down, due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
financial issue.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
that you are offering such a great opportunity, I want to grab this with both hands. In support of my eligibility, I have a bachelor's degree in education and I
also
completed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
grammar courses and I have been teaching an English subject at a local school as a part-time tutor for the last 1 year. I would like to provide my services to your college if you could give me a chance. Look forward to hearing from you. Yours
Faithfully
. Mark Hill.

IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter, say why you are writing describe your interest to work as an English teacher explain why you would be a suitable teacher for that community college

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
149 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter, say why you are writing describe your interest to work as an English teacher explain why you would be a suitable teacher for that community college