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write a letter to the manager of a restaurant where you had food earlier and had forgotten your jacket.

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Dear Sir, My name is Umang Patel. I am writing this letter to inform you that unfortunately I left my Jacket at table no. 5 of your Saffron restaurant situated in C G Square Street, I visited your restaurant on September 24, 2021 and my bill number is SF123NAV00129. Last weekend, I along with my three friends visited central Ahmedabad and decided to have dinner at your multi-cuisine restaurant. After finishing the meal everyone was clicking pictures and enjoying the moment at that time I accidentally left my jacket at the table and realized it only after reaching home. It is a Harley Davidson in black colour with a blue glossy shoulder which gives it a different look. Also, it has small 4 zip pocket on the front and back side. When I dialled your number from home, the waiter named Jay Sharma told me that jacket was safe, and he would give it to the Manager. I am really thankful to your cordial staff members for keeping it safe and now I request you to send it through courier to the my address. Kindly share your bank account number so that I can pay the courier charges. I apologise for any inconvenience this may have caused to you and I eagerly wait for your quick response. Yours Faithfully, Umang Patel
Dear Sir,

My name is
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Umang
Patel. I am writing this letter to inform you that unfortunately I
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left
my Jacket at table no. 5 of your Saffron restaurant situated in C G Square Street, I visited your restaurant on September 24,
Some style guides suggest that commas should set off the year in a month-day-year date: "2021,".
2021
and my bill number is SF123NAV00129.

Last weekend, I along with my three friends visited central Ahmedabad and decided to have dinner at your multi-cuisine restaurant. After finishing the meal everyone was clicking pictures and enjoying the moment at that time I
accidentally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
my jacket at the table and realized it
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only
after reaching home. It is a
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Harley Davidson
in black
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colour
with a blue glossy shoulder which gives it a
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different
look.
Also
, it has
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small
4 zip pocket on the front and back side.

When I
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dialled
your number from home, the waiter named Jay Sharma
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that jacket was safe, and he would give it to the Manager. I am
really
thankful to your cordial staff members for keeping it safe and
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now
I request you to
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send
it through courier to
A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "my address" or "the address"?
the my address
. Kindly share your bank account number
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so
that I can pay the courier charges.

I
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apologise
for any inconvenience this may have caused to you and I
eagerly
wait for your quick response.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Umang
Patel
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IELTS letter write a letter to the manager of a restaurant where you had food earlier and had forgotten your jacket.

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220 words
6.0
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