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You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do. NaXN
Dear Principal, Greetings for the day. I am writing to request for a one-week leave. I have joined for the Post Graduation course in Finance. My classes started last week. Unfortunately, I received an email from my previous college where I did my Under Graduation, asking me to come next week for a talk session to be conducted for the new students. I am excited to do this talk show as it will help me to earn a certificate and that would be helpful for me in the future when I start my Career. I believe you understand my situation and will allow me to take this 1 week off. However, I request you to do a small favour for me. I have asked my friend to record the classes taken during this one week time period. I hope you will grant permission for the same. Looking forward to receiving a positive response from your side, Yours Sincerely, Mary John
Dear Principal,

Greetings for the day. I am writing to request for a one-week
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
. I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
for the Post Graduation course in Finance. My classes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
last
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
week
. Unfortunately, I received an email from my previous college where I did my Under Graduation, asking me to
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come
next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
week
for a talk session to
be conducted
for the new students.

I
am excited
to do this talk
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show
as it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to earn a certificate and that would be helpful for me in the future when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
my Career. I believe you understand my situation and will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to take this 1
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
week
off.
However
, I request you to do a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
for me. I have asked my friend to record the classes taken during this one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
week
time period. I hope you will grant permission for the same.

Looking forward to receiving a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response from your side,

Yours
Sincerely
,

Mary John

IELTS letter You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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