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You are bored in your current job but you enjoy working for your company. You think you would be happier if you moved to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your employer. In the letter ask to be moved to a position in another department explain how you feel about your current position and your career say why you think changing your job would be good for you and the compan

You are bored in your current job but you enjoy working for your company. You think you would be happier if you moved to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your employer. In the letter ask to be moved to a position in another department explain how you feel about your current position and your career say why you think changing your job would be good for you and the compan QXp3
Dear Brad, I am writing this letter to ask your permission to move to a different position in our company. I've heard about a new opportunity in our Research and Development department, and I am extremely interested in that job and will be more than happy if you allow me to apply for that position. In my present job I do repetitive tasks every day, and it feels like I am a robot who is programmed to do specific tasks only. I mastered all the aspects of the quality control position, and have nothing new to learn, consequently, my growth is completely stopped. I have a bachelor in chemistry and Chemical Engineering along with 2 years of experience as a research assistant. Therefore, if you would allow me to work in research department then can I learn more about chemical compounds, their physical and chemical properties, and most importantly their use in the food industry. Additionally, I will help our company to grow using my education and research experience. Yours Sincerely,
Dear Brad,

I am writing this letter to ask your permission to
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move
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different
position in our
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company
. I've heard about a new opportunity in our
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Research
and Development department, and I am
extremely
interested in that job and will be more than happy if you
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allow
me to apply for that position.

In my present job I do repetitive tasks every day, and it feels like I am a robot who
is programmed
to do specific tasks
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only
. I mastered all the aspects of the quality control position, and have nothing new to learn,
consequently
, my growth is completely
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stopped
.

I have a bachelor in chemistry and Chemical Engineering along with 2 years of experience as a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
assistant.
Therefore
, if you would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to work in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
department then can I learn more about chemical compounds, their physical and chemical properties, and most
importantly
their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
in the food industry.
Additionally
, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
our
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company
to grow using my education and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
experience.

Yours
Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter You are bored in your current job but you enjoy working for your company. You think you would be happier if you moved to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your employer. In the letter ask to be moved to a position in another department explain how you feel about your current position and your career say why you think changing your job would be good for you and the compan

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