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You are a passanger of am airline company anda during the flight you feel extremly extremly unsatisfactory of the service.Please write a letter of complaint to the company.

You are a passanger of am airline company anda during the flight you feel extremly extremly unsatisfactory of the service. Please write a letter of complaint to the company. PkL9J
Dear Sir/Madam. I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the service I received during the flight with your plane on November, 15. Firstly, despite I paid enough for the lux class, the stewardresses did not bring me anything for 3hours until the flight ends. Also many of the travellers were not provided with snacks and beverages in that lux section. Additionally, the main reason why I got angry is the quality of seatbelts and gate of your plane. In spite of the fact that, the prices of your planes tickets were high, a life of humans were not protected enough. At the time of reaching our destination, the speaker claimed to wear the seatbelts, however they did not work. It was clear that there were poor-quality of technical and servical issues in your plane. My friends and I will not be flying in your plane again, however as a manager, you should be wise to guard against such appalling treatment of your customers, in future. I believe that these problems will be solved as soon as possible by you and your staff. I will look forward to hearing the best news and actions in response to my letter.
Dear Sir/Madam. I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the service I received during the flight with your
plane
on November, 15.
Firstly
, despite I paid
enough
for the lux
class
, the
stewardresses
did not bring me anything for 3hours until the flight ends.
Also
many
of the
travellers
were not provided with snacks and beverages in that lux section.
Additionally
, the main reason why I
got
angry is the quality of seatbelts and gate of your
plane
.
In spite of
the fact that, the prices of your
planes
tickets were high, a life of humans were not protected
enough
. At the time of reaching our destination, the speaker claimed to wear the seatbelts,
however
they did not work. It was
clear
that there were poor-quality of technical and
servical
issues in your
plane
. My friends and I will not be flying in your
plane
again,
however
as a manager, you should be wise to guard against such appalling treatment of your customers,
in future
. I believe that these problems will
be solved
as
soon
as possible by you and your staff. I will look forward to hearing the best news and actions in response to my letter.
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IELTS letter You are a passanger of am airline company anda during the flight you feel extremly extremly unsatisfactory of the service. Please write a letter of complaint to the company.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
200 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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