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I want to be a volunteer and help elderly people

I want to be a volunteer and help elderly people K3VP1

Dear Sir, My name is Daria Fedotova and I am writing this letter to inform you that I want to help the old people, working as a volunteer in your company. I’ve heard that you offered some places, so I’d like to know if it will be possible to suggest my candidacy. This year I got the certificate of the younger nurse, consequently I am able to take care of elderly people. Moreover, I am allowed to provide first aid, for the reason that I have been practising doing it, so if someone feels badly, I can be a helpful hand for them. In general, elderly people in the Old Aged Home lose their relatives or their children and grandchildren refused taking care of them. Personally, I want to make their lives happier, that’s why except medical help I’d like to give them a bit of communication. Moreover, it will be beneficial for me to, as the more I help people, the more I lighten my mood. I would be pleased if you gave me an opportunity to take part In you social programme. I am free on evenings from 6 o’clock and the whole weekend. Please feel free to call or write me for the further information. Hoping to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Daria.

Dear Sir,

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Fedotova and
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help
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old
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people
, working as a volunteer in your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. I’ve heard that you offered This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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so
 I’d like to know if it will be possible to suggest my candidacy.

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got
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people
. Moreover
, I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
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practising
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so
 if someone feels badly
, I can be a helpful hand for them. In general
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people
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Old
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, I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
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lives
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help
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, it will be beneficial for me to, as the more I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
, the more I lighten my mood.

I would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleased
 if you gave me an opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 In you social Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.program
programme
. I am free on evenings from 6 o’clock and the whole weekend. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 feel free to call or write me for the further
 information.

Hoping to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours faithfully
,

Daria. 