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Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

Dear Sir / Madam I am writing in connection with my recent stay at the Four Seasons in London, England. Unfortunately, due to a malfunctioning heater in my room, I spent three miserable nights at your hotel from April 26-29, 2010. When I arrived in London, there was an unexpected snowstorm. I understand it does not usually snow in April; however, when I got to my room, there was no heat. After complaining, a technician was sent up, who informed me they had to install a new heating unit. When I asked to be moved to another room, I was told the hotel was completely booked. Unfortunately, each night after work I returned to discover the problem had not been rectified. Eventually, I spent three horribly uncomfortable nights, wearing my coat to bed, wearing socks around the room and ending up with a bad cold from the unheated room. I had no time to complain as I had to catch a flight home right after my conference. I am shocked by this terrible service. This is not what anyone expects for $400 a night! To compensate me for this tremendous inconvenience, I ask that you refund my money right away and offer me a free, more comfortable stay in one of your finer suites in the future. If not, I am prepared to take my complaint to a higher authority. I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest, Yours faithfully, Mr John McFee

Dear Sir / Madam

I am writing in connection with my recent stay at the Four Seasons in London, England. Unfortunately, due to a malfunctioning heater in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
, I spent three miserable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmidnight
nights
 at your hotel from April 26-29, 2010.

When I arrived in London, there was an unexpected snowstorm. I understand it does not usually
 snow in April; however
, when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 to my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
, there was no heat. After complaining, a technician was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 up, who informed me they had to install a new heating unit. When I asked to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
, I was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 the hotel was completely booked. Unfortunately, each You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmidnight
night
 after work I returned to discover the problem had not been rectified
. Eventually
, I spent three horribly
 uncomfortable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmidnight
nights
, wearing my coat to bed, wearing socks around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 and ending up with a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 from the unheated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
. I had no time to complain as I had to catch a flight home right after my conference.

I am shocked
 by this terrible service. This is not what anyone This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipates
expects
 for $400 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmidnight
night
! To compensate me for this tremendous inconvenience, I ask that you refund my money right away and offer me a free, more comfortable stay in one of your finer suites in the future. If not, I am prepared
 to take my complaint to a higher authority.

I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest,

Yours faithfully
,

Mr John Possible spelling mistake found.McGeeMcKeeMcAfee
McFee