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write a letter to the organizers of the course which is designed to help improve memory.

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Dear sir, I am a student at the University of Economics in Da Nang city. I am twenty and in the last year of university. I intend to study for a master's degree after graduating bit I find it very hard to remember even small information of important facts and figures during my own university time. I tried to read documents again but there are a lot of books so I can not organize all of the information. I recently saw an advertisement for a course which is designed to help improve memory. I am interested in learning this strategy. I would be grateful if you could give me more details of the course such as the methods you used on your course, as well as the cost and dates of your course. As I am a student I do not have a lot of money so I have to consider the fees of the course and what I will receive after doing this course. I think I can benefit great deal from your course and looking forward to you reply. Your faithfully
Dear sir, I am a student at the University of Economics in
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Da
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Nang
city. I am twenty and in the last year of university. I intend to study for a master's degree after graduating bit I find it
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hard
to remember even
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small
information of
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important
facts and figures during my
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own
university time.
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I
tried to read documents again
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but
there are
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a lot of
books
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so
I can not organize
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all of the
information.
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I
recently
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saw
an advertisement for a
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course
which
is designed
to
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help
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improve
memory.
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I
am interested
in learning this strategy.
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I
would be grateful if you could give me more
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details
of the
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course
such as the methods you
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used
on your
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course
,
as well
as the cost and dates of your
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course
. As I am a student I do not have
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a lot of
money
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so
I
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have to
consider the fees of the
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course
and what I will receive after doing this
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course
. I
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think
I can benefit great deal from your
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course
and looking forward to you reply. Your
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faithfully
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IELTS letter write a letter to the organizers of the course which is designed to help improve memory.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
182 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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