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Dear sir, I am a student at the University of Economics in Da Nang city. I am twenty and in the last year of university. I intend to study for a master's degree after graduating bit I find it very hard to remember even small information of important facts and figures during my own university time. I tried to read documents again but there are a lot of books so I can not organize all of the information. I recently saw an advertisement for a course which is designed to help improve memory. I am interested in learning this strategy. I would be grateful if you could give me more details of the course such as the methods you used on your course, as well as the cost and dates of your course. As I am a student I do not have a lot of money so I have to consider the fees of the course and what I will receive after doing this course. I think I can benefit great deal from your course and looking forward to you reply. Your faithfully

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IELTS letter write a letter to the organizers of the course which is designed to help improve memory.

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

182 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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