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Family life during covid

Family life during covid YRxKN
Hello Simon, It is a pleasure that you reached out to me. I have included information about my family life for you. Firstly, we spend our leisure time as a family in the living room. Prior to the pandemic, we rarely sat together as a family. Now our bond is stronger. Regarding the difficulties, the lockdown caused us a lot of anxiety. We all felt trapped. We frequently take our frustrations out on everyone. If we felt stressed, it was time to go outside for a few minutes to get some fresh air.
Hello Simon,

It is a pleasure that you reached out to me. I have included information about my family life for you.

Firstly
, we spend our leisure time as a family in the living room. Prior to the pandemic, we rarely sat together as a family.
Now
our bond is stronger.

Regarding the difficulties, the lockdown caused us
a lot of
anxiety. We all felt trapped. We
frequently
take our frustrations out on everyone. If we felt
stressed
, it was time to go outside for a few minutes to
get
some
fresh air.
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IELTS letter Family life during covid

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
93 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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