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Describing a person - appearance, personality, interests,

Describing a person - appearance, personality, interests, qaDAr

hello Dave, It's been a long time we haven't talked. So, I wanna share about one of my best friends. Her name is Reiko. She is 18 years old. She is a very easy-going person. Therefore, we get on well with each other. She always remembers my birthday without Facebook's Reminder. She's good at singing. She likes to go music box. She has a good sense of humor. She can make the conversation to be alive. Everyone likes talking with her. She's got cool blue hair. She has blue eyes. She has only one dimple. It's a kind of attractive thing. Sometimes she's childish. When she is with elders, she always behaves like a child. But with friends, she is mature. She's tall and fairly well-built. She always wears stylish clothes. She likes wearing sunglasses. I think so you can also get well with her. So, see u. I miss u these days. Love, Su

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hello
 Dave,

It's been a long time we haven't talked. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I wanna share about one of my best friends. Her name is Reiko. She is 18 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. She is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 easy-going person. Therefore
, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 on well with each other. She always remembers my birthday without Facebook's Reminder. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermother
She's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 at singing. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
She
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadmireappreciatelovego for
likes
 to go music box. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
She
 has a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 sense of humor. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
She
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the conversation to be alive. Everyone You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadmireappreciatelovego for
likes
 talking with her. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermother
She's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 cool blue hair. She has blue eyes. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
She
 has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one dimple. It's a kind of attractive thing. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermother
she's
 childish. When she is with elders, she always behaves You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomparablealikerelated
like
 a child. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 with friends, she is mature. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermother
She's
 tall and fairly
 well-built. She always wears stylish clothes. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
She
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadmireappreciatelovego for
likes
 wearing sunglasses. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you can also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 well with her.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 u. I miss u these days.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
,

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