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Writing task 1 a letter Your friend wants to come and spend his her holiday staying at your place for a week Write an apology letter to him her and say Explain why you can t do it on those particular dates Suggest some alternative dates and things to do

Writing task 1 a letter Your friend wants to come and spend his her holiday staying at your place for a week Write an apology letter to him her and say Explain why you can t do it on those particular dates Suggest some alternative dates and things to do 85Gjw

Dear John Smith, Hope you are doing well. I received your letter and you mentioned that you are coming to Chennai and stay in my place on July 1st to July 7th for a 1week vacation. Unfortunately, I am going to New York on July 1st for two weeks office trip. I can’t skip this trip as I am representing my company in the business conference in New York on July 5th. So I regret that I would not be in Chennai when you visit for your holidays. However, I will arrange you to stay with my friend Jackson. I already told about you to Jackson; he will help you to stay in his house. Jackson wil. . .

Dear John Smith,

Hope you are doing well. I received your letter and you mentioned that you are coming to Chennai and stay in my place on July 1st to July 7th for a 1week vacation.

Unfortunately, I am going to New York on July 1st for two weeks office trip. I can’t skip this trip as I am representing my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 in the business conference in New York on July 5th. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I regret that I would not be in Chennai when you visit for your holidays.

However
, I will arrange you to stay with my friend Jackson. I already This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 about you to Jackson; he will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you to stay in his This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. Jackson Possible spelling mistake found.willwinoilwildWillwit
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IELTS letter Writing task 1 a letter Your friend wants to come and spend his her holiday staying at your place for a week Write an apology letter to him her and say Explain why you can t do it on those particular dates Suggest some alternative dates and things to do

Letter

American English

4 paragraphs

119 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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