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Writing task 1 a letter Your friend wants to come and spend his her holiday staying at your place for a week Write an apology letter to him her and say Explain why you can t do it on those particular dates Suggest some alternative dates and things to do

Writing task 1 a letter Your friend wants to come and spend his her holiday staying at your place for a week Write an apology letter to him her and say Explain why you can t do it on those particular dates Suggest some alternative dates and things to do 85Gjw
Dear John Smith, Hope you are doing well. I received your letter and you mentioned that you are coming to Chennai and stay in my place on July 1st to July 7th for a 1week vacation. Unfortunately, I am going to New York on July 1st for two weeks office trip. I can’t skip this trip as I am representing my company in the business conference in New York on July 5th. So I regret that I would not be in Chennai when you visit for your holidays. However, I will arrange you to stay with my friend Jackson. I already told about you to Jackson; he will help you to stay in his house. Jackson wil. . .
Dear John Smith,

Hope you are doing well. I received your letter and you mentioned that you are coming to Chennai and stay in my place on July 1st to July 7th for a 1week vacation.

Unfortunately, I am going to New York on July 1st for two weeks office trip. I can’t skip this trip as I am representing my
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company
in the business conference in New York on July 5th.
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I regret that I would not be in Chennai when you visit for your holidays.

However
, I will arrange you to stay with my friend Jackson. I already
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told
about you to Jackson; he will
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help
you to stay in his
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house
. Jackson
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IELTS letter Writing task 1 a letter Your friend wants to come and spend his her holiday staying at your place for a week Write an apology letter to him her and say Explain why you can t do it on those particular dates Suggest some alternative dates and things to do

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4 paragraphs
119 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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