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Writing task 1 a letter You have recently bought a TV and it arrived damaged Write a letter to the store manager and say When and what TV did you buy Describe the damage How can the issue be solved in your opinion

Writing task 1 a letter You have recently bought a TV and it arrived damaged Write a letter to the store manager and say When and what TV did you buy Describe the damage How can the issue be solved in your opinion yXL3d
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express dissatisfaction of damaged TV which I had bought from your shop yesterday. The power button on the television is broken unable to switch on the television Due to this I can switch on TV only with the remote control. In addition, the sound of the television is very poor quality. Background noise awkward to listen while watching the television. Moreover, When I was shown the color of the TV was light green but the delivered product is in dark green color. I was frustrated since I had paid the full amount for the new television but unable to watch the television. Please replace the television as soon as possible with correct color with excellent quality or else refund my money I would return the television. Hope you will understand the problem caused by the product. I am a regular customer of this shop. So please take action immediately waiting for your immediate response. Yours faithfully, Jonn Wilson
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to express dissatisfaction of damaged TV which I had
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bought
from your shop yesterday.

The power button on the
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television
is broken
unable to switch on the
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television
Due to this I can switch on TV
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only
with the remote control.
In addition
, the sound of the
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television
is
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very
poor quality. Background noise awkward to listen while watching the
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television
.
Moreover
, When I
was shown
the color of the TV was light green
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but
the delivered product is in dark green color.

I
was frustrated
since I had paid the full amount for the new
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television
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but
unable to
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watch
the
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television
.
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Please
replace the
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television
as
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soon
as possible with correct color with excellent quality or else refund my money I would return the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
. Hope you will understand the problem caused by the product. I am a regular customer of this shop.
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So
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
take action immediately waiting for your immediate response.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Jonn
Wilson

IELTS letter Writing task 1 a letter You have recently bought a TV and it arrived damaged Write a letter to the store manager and say When and what TV did you buy Describe the damage How can the issue be solved in your opinion

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  American English
6 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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