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letter to new neighbour.

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Dear sir or Madame: I hope you are doing well. My Name is David Fernández, Your new neighbour. My couple and I recently move from Spain. I am writing to you on regards of a "Welcome party" that we are going to held in our house next Monday. As we do not want to disturb you with the noise, the party is going to be at the early afternoon and not at the nigths hours. We actually wish you can attend to our party as I believe it can be a great opportunity to meet in person and to know about each others. if you are not able to come and you feel that we can be making any noises, do not hesitate to contact me as we have been told you have a little kid. I take this opportunity to say that you can tell us anything you need from us during our stay in the neigbourhood. Best Regards, David Fernández.
Dear sir or Madame:

I hope you are doing well.

My Name is David Fernández, Your new
neighbour
. My couple and I recently
move
from Spain.

I am writing to you on regards of a
"
Welcome party
"
that we are going to
held
in our
house
next
Monday.

As we do not want to disturb you with the noise, the party is going to be at the early afternoon and not at the
nigths
hours.

We actually wish you can attend to our party as I believe it can be a great opportunity to
meet
in person and to know about each
others
.

if
you are not able to
come
and you feel that we can be making any noises, do not hesitate to contact me as we have been
told
you have a
little
kid.

I take this opportunity to say that you can
tell
us anything you need from us during our stay in the
neigbourhood
.

Best Regards,

David Fernández.
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IELTS letter letter to new neighbour.

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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