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You went at the restaurant the last day .write a letter to complain the services of the restaurant

You went at the restaurant the last day. write a letter to complain the services of the restaurant 9wJ1w
Dear, Sir I am writing to complain about the position of your Restaurant's services. Yesterday I went to your restaurant with my husband and I find it most unsatisfactory as well as not well- organized the system of the services. Nevertheless, We had dinner there providing it would be better the previous coming. Also, the table we ordered two days ago had not been cleared when we gone. It was full of unwashed dishes. Thus, We were a little nervous about this situation and waited for almost half an hour. Furthermore, the waiter brought us chicken broth instead of beef. He could have told in advance that the beef soup was over. Moreover, his behavior did not satisfy us. Because, when we told him to replace the fizzy drink with plain water, he told us that he did not have time right now. Admittedly, it was the first time I was unhappy with your restaurant. Also, as a regular client, I hope you will deal with this matter quickly. At the same time, I would suggest that you should increase the number of waiters and the amount of food in case more customer come. Yours faithfully, Sara Beth.
Dear, Sir

I am writing to complain about the position of your Restaurant's services.

Yesterday I went to your restaurant with my husband and I find it most unsatisfactory
as well
as not well- organized the system of the services.

Nevertheless
, We had dinner there providing it would be better the previous coming.

Also
, the table we ordered two days ago had not
been cleared
when we gone. It was full of unwashed dishes.
Thus
, We were a
little
nervous about this situation and waited for almost half an hour.
Furthermore
, the waiter brought us chicken broth
instead
of beef. He could have
told
in advance that the beef soup was over.
Moreover
, his behavior did not satisfy us.
Because
, when we
told
him to replace the fizzy drink with plain water, he
told
us that he did not have time right
now
.
Admittedly
, it was the
first
time I was unhappy with your restaurant.
Also
, as a regular client, I hope you will deal with this matter
quickly
. At the same time, I would suggest that you should increase the number of waiters and the amount of food in case more customer
come
. Yours
faithfully
, Sara Beth.
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IELTS letter You went at the restaurant the last day. write a letter to complain the services of the restaurant

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
198 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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