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writing an informal letter to your friend

writing an informal letter to your friend MlMD6

dear Jane, I'm just writing to let you know that it might be impossible for me to have a day out with you. it’s so regrettable to say so but i have no choice due to another reason. I had expected the day we’ll hang out together but how unlucky it was that yesterday, my 8th-grade input test which has been put off for a long time because of the quarantine time was informed to be held the following week so I have to take all the rest of my time revising. I was phan van an to whom will go instead of me in order that you won’t miss your all-time favourite film. Fortunately, Lin was up to my mind at the time and I decided to let her go instead of me. As Lin is still taking a gap year for university and free all day without doing anything, she is really excited about that. besides, she is supremely good at the bustling city roads so she will help you arrive more quickly and in such an easy way rather than waiting for the busy traffic. hope you’ll enjoy your day with lin, bye,

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterDear
dear
 Jane,

I'm This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 writing to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know that it might be impossible for me to have a day out with you. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
’s This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 regrettable to say This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have no choice due to another reason.

I had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 the day we’ll hang out together This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 how unlucky it was that yesterday, my 8th-grade input This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 which has been put
 off for a long You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the quarantine You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
was informed
 to be held
 the following week This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 take all the rest of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 revising.

I was Possible spelling mistake found.fanthanfansfarplanfun
phan
 van Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 to whom will go instead
 of me in order that you won’t miss your all-time Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.favorite
favourite
 film. Fortunately
, Lin was up to my mind at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 and I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 her go instead
 of me.

As Lin is still
 taking a gap year for university and free all day without doing anything, she is really
 excited about that. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBesides
besides
, she is supremely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 at the bustling city roads This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 she will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you arrive more quickly
 and in such an easy way rather
 than waiting for the busy traffic.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHope
hope
 you’ll enjoy your day with Possible spelling mistake found.Lininlinewinlinklie
lin
,

bye, 

IELTS letter writing an informal letter to your friend

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

196 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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