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writing an informal letter to your friend

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dear Jane, I'm just writing to let you know that it might be impossible for me to have a day out with you. it’s so regrettable to say so but i have no choice due to another reason. I had expected the day we’ll hang out together but how unlucky it was that yesterday, my 8th-grade input test which has been put off for a long time because of the quarantine time was informed to be held the following week so I have to take all the rest of my time revising. I was phan van an to whom will go instead of me in order that you won’t miss your all-time favourite film. Fortunately, Lin was up to my mind at the time and I decided to let her go instead of me. As Lin is still taking a gap year for university and free all day without doing anything, she is really excited about that. besides, she is supremely good at the bustling city roads so she will help you arrive more quickly and in such an easy way rather than waiting for the busy traffic. hope you’ll enjoy your day with lin, bye,
dear
Jane,

I'm
just
writing to
let
you know that it might be impossible for me to have a day out with you.
it
’s
so
regrettable to say
so
but
i
have no choice due to another reason.

I had
expected
the day we’ll hang out together
but
how unlucky it was that yesterday, my 8th-grade input
test
which has
been put
off for a long
time
because
of the quarantine
time
was informed
to
be held
the following week
so
I
have to
take all the rest of my
time
revising.

I was
phan
van
an
to whom will go
instead
of me in order that you won’t miss your all-time
favourite
film.
Fortunately
, Lin was up to my mind at the
time
and I decided to
let
her go
instead
of me.

As Lin is
still
taking a gap year for university and free all day without doing anything, she is
really
excited about that.
besides
, she is
supremely
good
at the bustling city roads
so
she will
help
you arrive more
quickly
and in such an easy way
rather
than waiting for the busy traffic.

hope
you’ll enjoy your day with
lin
,

bye,
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IELTS letter writing an informal letter to your friend

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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