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Task 1: write an email: your friend will visit Ha Noi for the first time. Suggest accommodation, places, and activities.

Task 1: write an email: your friend will visit Ha Noi for the first time. Suggest accommodation, places, and activities. N3G9q
Dear Ameri, I’m so happy to know that you’re coming to Ha Noi. I will make you happy when you first come here. For you to feel comfortable and bustling, you can come to my house. Within a day, I think you shouldn’t miss the trip to Hanoi Old Quater, the most fascinating place in Ha Noi. In there, you can also have an opportunity to enjoy great Vietnamese food on road. Next, you can have a look at Hoan Kiem Lake and Turtle Tower. Walk around the lake and admire the scenery of the atmosphere here. Tell me when you’re coming so I can take you there. Look forward to seeing you soon! Best wishes, Iruma
Dear
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Ameri
,

I’m
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happy to know that you’re coming to Ha
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Noi
. I will
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make
you happy when you
first
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come
here. For you to feel comfortable and bustling, you can
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come
to my
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house
. Within a day, I
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think
you shouldn’t miss the trip to Hanoi
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Old
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Quater
, the most fascinating place in Ha
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Noi
. In there, you can
also
have an opportunity to enjoy great Vietnamese food on road.
Next
, you can have a look at
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Hoan
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Kiem
Lake and Turtle Tower. Walk around the lake and admire the scenery of the atmosphere here.
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Tell
me when you’re coming
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so
I can take you there.

Look forward to seeing you
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soon
!

Best wishes,

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Iruma
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IELTS letter Task 1: write an email: your friend will visit Ha Noi for the first time. Suggest accommodation, places, and activities.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
116 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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