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Write an email of invitation of about 50-70 words to a friend. Use your notes from Exercise 9 and phrases from the WRITING FOCUS.

Write an email of invitation of about 50-70 words to a friend. Use your notes from Exercise 9 and phrases from the WRITING FOCUS. Dqyyp

Hello Jodi, How are things? Do you want to come to my class new year party? It is at our canteen at 8: 30 pm coming Sunday night. And it is like a 'bring-your-own' party. That's why you have to bring some fast foods or you can also take some snacks you make. You know your baby burgers are so delicious and your milk shakes too. I hope you can come and bring a friend too. Text me and let me know! Love, Su

Hello Jodi, How are things? Do you want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 new year party? It is at our canteen at 8: 30 pm coming Sunday night. And it is like a 'bring-your-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
' party. That's why you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 bring This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 foods or you can also
 take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 snacks you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
. You know your baby burgers are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 delicious and your milk shakes too. I hope you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and bring a friend too. Text me and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know! This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
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IELTS letter Write an email of invitation of about 50-70 words to a friend. Use your notes from Exercise 9 and phrases from the WRITING FOCUS.

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

83 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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