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complaint to missing items 0aoQl
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complaint about my recent purchase from your online store. Although my order was delivered ahead of the estimated delivery date, , I was disappointed to discover that it was incomplete. On Friday, 19th November, I had placed an order for a pair of high heels in size 37, a pair of earrings and an evening dress. I was assure that these items had unique, fashionable designs and your store was the best place to buy them. However, when I opened the package, I found out the dress I had ordered was missing I have spent the entire day looking for the best outfit styling so I can look my best at my cousin’s weeding party in five days time. This delivery is critical because I do not have enough time to purchase another dress that suit perfectly with the high heels I bought from your store. Moreover, she is the most important person in my life and I want to make sure everything is perfect Since it is a mistake on your side, I would be most grateful if you could give your immediate attention to having someone to send me the missing dress as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing back from you soon Yours faithfully, Linh
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to complaint about my recent
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purchase
from your online store. Although my order
was delivered
ahead of the estimated delivery date,
Two consecutive commas
,
I
was disappointed
to discover that it was incomplete.

On Friday, 19th November, I had placed an order for a pair of high heels in size 37, a pair of earrings and an evening
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dress
. I was
Consider using a past participle here: "assured".
assure
that these items had unique, fashionable designs and your store was the best place to
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buy
them.
However
, when I opened the package, I found out the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dress
I had ordered was missing

I have spent the entire day looking for the best outfit styling
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so
I can look my best at my cousin’s weeding party in five days time. This delivery is critical
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because
I do not have
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enough
time to
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purchase
another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dress
that suit
perfectly
with the high heels I
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bought
from your store.
Moreover
, she is the most
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important
person in my life and I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure everything is perfect

Since it is a mistake on your side, I would be most grateful if you could give your immediate attention to having someone to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me the missing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dress
as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.

I look forward to hearing back from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon


Yours
faithfully
,

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Linh
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IELTS letter complaint to missing items

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
215 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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