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Writing a complaint letter to the store manager

Writing a complaint letter to the store manager q58bd

Dear Sir I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction about the poor service provided by your company. In fact, I expected a better service from a company of your reputation but it was not what I waited. On the 23 rd of June I visited one of your local stores in order to buy a mobile phone for my sister. Looking around the shop I encountered expected item and I asked a shop assistant about it. After getting all information I decided to purchase it. A week later my sister made a call and said about the problems of the item. When she used the phone for the first time it worked properly and the fu nctions came out clearly and perfectly. However when he utilized it the second time there seemed to have been malfunction while it was working. The sound of the speaker was poor and there was a bad connection with the other side. Furthermore, when she tried another functions the same thing happened. In addition to this the phone did not connect with the internet. I would be grateful if you could change the item. If you could, please make a call to my phone number which I wrote to your registration book. I look forward to having a relay of my complaint. Your faithfully Miss Donna

Dear Sir

I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction about the poor service provided by your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. In fact, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 a better service from a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 of your reputation This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it was not what I waited.

On the Did you mean "23rd"?23rd
23 rd
 of June I visited one of your local stores in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 for my sister. Looking around the shop I encountered This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 item and I asked a shop assistant about it. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 getting all information I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 it. A week later my sister made a call and said about the problems of the item. When she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 for the first
 time it worked properly
 and the Possible spelling mistake found.functions
fu nctions
 came out clearly
 and perfectly
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 when he utilized it the second time there seemed to have been malfunction while it was working. The sound of the speaker was poor and there was a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 connection with the other side.

Furthermore
, when she tried another functions the same thing happened.

In addition
 to this the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 did not connect with the internet.

I would be grateful if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the item. If you could, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a call to my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 number which I wrote to your registration book.

I look forward to having a relay of my complaint.

Your faithfully


Miss Donna