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Write to the company’s manager about construction near your home. In your letter: * how you heard of their construction plans * what you think of their plans * your hopes for the construction in case it pushes through

Write to the company’s manager about construction near your home. In your letter: * how you heard of their construction plans * what you think of their plans * your hopes for the construction in case it pushes through Jow7k
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing about the recent advert posted in the Hindu newspaper last Sunday about the construction of an Ecopark in Chetpet, Chennai. I am delighted to read this post because it is going to fetch several benefits to the local community members. Further, this is going to be environmentally friendly for children, adults and senior citizens, because of your idea to have a separate track for walkers and joggers, children play area, a seafood restaurant and open theatre space for any events. Since the park is going to occupy 16 acres of the land in the centre of the city, I wish to have recreational activities like fishing and boating in a lake with scenic view of flowers and trees around. Additionally, I hope hygiene measures for toilets and installation of camera surveillance are already existing in the plan to ensure safety and security for the public I look forward to seeing the newly build park soon. Yours faithfully, DImple Jay
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing about the recent advert posted in the Hindu newspaper last Sunday about the construction of an
Ecopark
in
Chetpet
, Chennai.

I
am delighted
to read this post
because
it is going to fetch several benefits to the local community members.
Further
, this is going to be
environmentally
friendly for children, adults and senior citizens,
because
of your
idea
to have a separate
track
for walkers and joggers, children play area, a seafood restaurant and open
theatre
space for any
events
.

Since the park is going to occupy 16 acres of the land in the
centre
of the city, I wish to have recreational activities like fishing and boating in a lake with scenic view of flowers and trees around.
Additionally
, I hope hygiene measures for toilets and installation of camera surveillance are already existing in the plan to ensure safety and security for the public

I look forward to seeing the
newly
build park
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

DImple
Jay
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IELTS letter Write to the company’s manager about construction near your home. In your letter: * how you heard of their construction plans * what you think of their plans * your hopes for the construction in case it pushes through

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  American English
7 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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