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Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match dolOP
Dear Sam, How are you feeling now? By the way, I'm writing this letter to give updates about the last weekend match. Since you're away for the semi-final match, all our teammates are so perplexed about the match against our counter side. Although, its toughest match for every member of our party and everyone did a great job till the end. But, unfortunately in the last over of the game, they scored highest runs. Due to that, they won the game. Also, I forgot to mention about that day's weather, it's so windy and about to rain for the entire day. Our team made a splendid effort in order to beat the wind, but they exhausted at the end. Because of this high speed wind, team unable to meet the target which was initially set by our captain. For me, it's a nice game to battle with with opposite side, I learnt some of the bowling techniques from the member of the opposite team. At once, I thought to apply immediately for the next game. But I didn't have the chance to accommodate them. Overall the game was a massive hit with the bustling crowd. Hope I, see you soon in the field with the all powers to bat. Best regards Shareef
Dear Sam,

How are you feeling
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now
? By the way, I'm writing this letter to give updates about the last weekend match.

Since you're away for the semi-final match, all our teammates are
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so
perplexed about the match against our counter side. Although, its toughest match for every member of our party and everyone did a great job till the
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end
.
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But
, unfortunately in the last over of the game, they scored
A determiner is probably missing here: "the highest".
highest
runs. Due to that, they won the game.

Also
, I forgot to
Did you mean simply "mention that"? You do not need the word "about" here.
mention about that
day's weather, it's
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so
windy and about to rain for the entire day. Our team made a splendid effort in order to beat the wind,
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but
they exhausted at the
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end
.
Because of this
high speed wind, team unable to
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meet
the target which was
initially
set by our captain.

For me, it's a nice game to battle
Possible typo: you repeated a word
with with
opposite side, I
Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.
learnt
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
some of the
bowling techniques from the member of the opposite team. At once, I
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thought
to apply immediately for the
next
game.
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But
I didn't have the chance to accommodate them.

Overall
the game was a massive hit with the bustling crowd. Hope I,
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see
you
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soon
in the field with the all powers to bat.

Best regards

Shareef
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

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211 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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