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You and Andrew are now at the film festival. You receive a message on your phone from another friend, Richard. Read the message and reply.

You and Andrew are now at the film festival. You receive a message on your phone from another friend, Richard. Read the message and reply. m81ed
Hi Richard. I’m watching “Child in Time” with Andrew now, at a film festival in Sunnyhill Park. But the film will end soon and we are planning to go to art galleries. There are many ancient pictures and sculptures there. If you can come, please reply to my message soon, we will meet at the entrance when you arrive. Don’t forget to bring money for art gallery tickets and an umbrella, maybe it will rain. See you soon, Phi
Hi Richard.

I’m watching “Child in Time” with Andrew
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now
, at a film festival in
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Sunnyhill
Park.

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But
the film will
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end
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soon and
we are planning to go to art galleries. There are
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many
ancient pictures and sculptures there.

If you can
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come
,
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please
reply to my message
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soon
, we will
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meet
at the entrance when you arrive.

Don’t forget to bring money for art gallery tickets and an umbrella, maybe it will rain.

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See
you
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soon
,

Phi
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IELTS letter You and Andrew are now at the film festival. You receive a message on your phone from another friend, Richard. Read the message and reply.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
78 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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