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Write a letter to company you actually took help of help while moving one place to another

Write a letter to company you actually took help of help while moving one place to another 70ad2

Dear sirI am Jyot, I would like to express my dissatisfaction about the damage of my household stuff, through this letter. As your branch had to deliver my stuff from Vishnu Garden to Rajouri Garden. Although, I had been receiving my items on time at my new location. But when I was unwrapping them then didn't was noticed by me on the front door of refrigerator, which I bought nearly two months ago. In addition to this, the glass of centre table was also broken, while watching I did not control on my emotions. When I was arranging your service at that time manager of your branch shot me no damage damage will be there during delivery. I would like to we have compensation for all those items as they are insured from your company moreover I would like to suggest you that quality of stuff. should be improved as as they should be more careful about important things. I hope you will consider my suggestion and apply them waiting for your prompt respond

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.SiriSirsiresirsariSirs
sirI
 am Possible spelling mistake found.Jot
Jyot
, I would like to express my dissatisfaction about the The usual collocation for word "damage" is "to" not "of." Revise: "damage to".damage to
damage of
 my household stuff, through this letter. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 your branch had to deliver my stuff from Vishnu Garden to Possible spelling mistake found.Mahjouri
Rajouri
 Garden.

“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, I had been receiving my items on time at my new location. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 when I was unwrapping them then didn't was noticed
 by me on the front door of refrigerator, which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
nearly
 two months ago. In addition
 to this, the glass of Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 table was also
 broken, while watching I did not control on my emotions. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 I was arranging your service at that time manager of your branch shot me no Possible typo: you repeated a worddamage
damage damage
 will be there during delivery.

I would like to we have compensation for all those items as they are insured
 from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
moreover
 I would like to suggest you that quality of stuff. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterShould
should
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
Possible typo: you repeated a wordas
as as
 they should be more careful about This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 things. I hope you will consider my suggestion and apply them waiting for your prompt Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphrespond.respond!respond?respond:respond,respond;
respond