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Q) You study in different nation. Your college invited you to volunteer to conduct international day. Write a letter to your Cordinator - If you like the idea - If you prepare special dish - Any activity you plan to do

Q) You study in different nation. Your college invited you to volunteer to conduct international day. Write a letter to your Cordinator - If you like the idea - If you prepare special dish - Any activity you plan to do 2PjYx
Dear Mr. Armaan, I am writing this letter with regard to applaud you for an amazing plan of organizing an international day and i am grateful to you for giving me a chance of performing a voluntary work on this wonderful event which may bring tremendous benefits to all of the participants. Firstly, since our college has students from worldwide so it would be advantageous for them to interact with other culture students and cultural exchange on this grand event. Besides this, being an indian i can showcase my culinary skills by preparing traditional cuisines of punjab state, which I am certain everyone will love to relish. Moreover, I am good at dancing as well as singing so in order to make that day memorable if i can arrange both of these competitions it may give a chance to perform folk song and dance by students. Not only students can entertain themselves but also they can get acquainted with other cultures. Therefore, that day will become special and unforgettable celebration for them. Should you require any further assistance, please let me know in advance and it would be nice if you inform me about other necessary details on my contact number 765625408. Once again, I would express my sincere thanks to you for considering me to be a part of this occasion. Yours sincerely, Inaayat.
Dear Mr.
Armaan
,

I am writing this letter with regard to applaud you for an amazing plan of organizing an international day and
i
am grateful to you for giving me a chance of performing a voluntary work on this wonderful
event
which may bring tremendous benefits to
all of the
participants.

Firstly
, since our college has
students
from worldwide
so
it would be advantageous for them to interact with other culture
students
and cultural exchange on this grand
event
.
Besides
this, being an
indian
i
can showcase my culinary
skills
by preparing traditional cuisines of
punjab
state, which I am certain everyone will
love
to relish.

Moreover
, I am
good
at dancing
as well
as singing
so
in order to
make
that day memorable if
i
can arrange both of these competitions it may give a chance to perform folk song and dance by
students
. Not
only
students
can entertain themselves
but
also
they can
get
acquainted with other cultures.
Therefore
, that day will become special and unforgettable celebration for them. Should you require any
further
assistance,
please
let
me know in advance and it would be nice if you inform me about other necessary
details
on my contact number 765625408.

Once again, I would express my sincere thanks to you for considering me to be a part of this occasion.

Yours
sincerely
,

Inaayat
.
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IELTS letter Q) You study in different nation. Your college invited you to volunteer to conduct international day. Write a letter to your Cordinator - If you like the idea - If you prepare special dish - Any activity you plan to do

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  American English
7 paragraphs
225 words
6.0
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