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write an email to respone a friend from Canada for Canada journal

write an email to respone a friend from Canada for Canada journal MlxVq

Dear Robin, I am writing this email in response to our plan in Canada. First of all, I want to thank you for inviting me to join a sports camp in the mountains in July. I feel excited after reading your invitation and really want to take part in this camp. For your suggestion, I think I am going to fly over to Canada in late June and stay with you in the city. I wish we could go sightseeing some famous places in the city and go to the cinema together before the sports camp. For the sports camp, the sports which you told me about are exciting. Moreover, I see that we can sleep in tents because going to camp without staying in tents will not be fun. If possible, we can get a campfire and cook dinner. What do you think about that? . I think I can cook some special dishes from my country like Banh mi. I hope I will see you soon in Canada and we will have a wonderful time. Yours sincerely, Thu

Dear Robin,

I am writing this email in response to our plan in Canada. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, I want to thank you for inviting me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 camp in the mountains in July. I feel excited after reading your invitation and really
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in this camp. For your suggestion, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I am going to fly
 over to Canada in late June and stay with you in the city. I wish we could go sightseeing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 places in the city and go to the cinema together This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 camp.

For the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 camp, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 which you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me about are exciting. Moreover
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that we can sleep in tents This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 going to camp without staying in tents will not be fun. If possible, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a campfire and cook dinner. What do you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about that? Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I can cook This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 special dishes from my country like Possible spelling mistake found.BandBeingBankBanBathBach
Banh
 mi.

I hope I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 in Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Canada, and
Canada and
 we will have a wonderful time.

Yours sincerely
,

Thu