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Letter to magazine abount an incorrect information about your town

Letter to magazine abount an incorrect information about your town L3gaR

Dear Madam or Sir, I am writing this letter to make you aware of an incorrect information about Mumbai in your magazine for the month of March 2021. There is an article on Page number 21 in Cosmopolitan March 2021 issue about my town Mumbai wherein it is mentioned that Taj Mahal which is one of the wonders of the world is located just 2 hours from Mumbai. I would like to being to your notice that this information is incorrect since my town is located west of India while Taj Mahal is located in the central of India. This information needs to be corrected since it would misguide the tourists from other countries who come to visit India every year and visiting Taj Mahal is most probably the part of their itinery. I think the magazine should issue a supplementary information about the correct facts.

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