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Suggesting your friend to take driving lesson

Suggesting your friend to take driving lesson 0MW8n
Dear Sanjana, Hope you are doing well. I recieved your letter yesterday. I am glad to know that you shifted to London to find new opportunities for your business. I was shocked to know that still you have not made up your mind for learning to drive. Driving is very essential i today's busy life and for you infact it is beneficial as it will save alot of your money which you spend on your chauffer. Apart from all this it will make you independent and you can control your time and schedules on your own. Its a coincident recently I came across an advertisment of drivewell driving school and you will not believe they are near your new house. I have checked their reviews and think it will solve your purpose. Join the classes as soon as possible and do not forget to practice daily. Please never drive alone until you have been said to do so by your trainer. Lear quickly and always drive safe. Hope to meet you soon. Regards Priyanka
Dear
Sanjana
,

Hope you are doing well. I
recieved
your letter yesterday. I am glad to know that you shifted to London to find new opportunities for your business.
I
was shocked
to know that
still
you have not made up your mind for learning to drive.

Driving is
very
essential i
today
's busy life and for you
infact
it is beneficial as it will save
alot
of your money which you spend on your
chauffer
. Apart from all this it will
make
you independent and you can control your time and schedules on your
own
.

Its
a coincident recently I came across an
advertisment
of
drivewell
driving school and you will not believe they are near your new
house
. I have
checked
their reviews and
think
it will solve your purpose.

Join
the classes as
soon
as possible and do not forget to practice daily.
Please
never drive alone until you have
been said
to do
so
by your trainer. Lear
quickly
and always drive safe.

Hope to
meet
you
soon
.

Regards

Priyanka
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IELTS letter Suggesting your friend to take driving lesson

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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