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This is to report the problem

This is to report the problem RVqyk

Dear Mr Jone OR To whom it may concern This is to report the problem about my furniture, after received furniture in my home I saw some of Chairs and tables is broken, is bad situation for me. I am very sad because after seven mont I waiting to receive, now I have many broken chairs and tables. In my opinion your company doesn't professional and very bad service to customers, I prefer my money back and order to another company. I hope improve your company and better service to your customer My request is please soon as possible solve the problem Yours sincerely Kiarash Fadavi

Dear Mr Possible spelling mistake found.OneJuneDoneGoneNoneZone
Jone


OR

To whom it may concern

This is to report the problem about my furniture, after received furniture in my home I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
Consider using "some Chairs" or "some of the Chairs".some Chairssome of the Chairs
some of Chairs
 and tables is broken
, is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 situation for me.

I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 sad This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 after seven Possible spelling mistake found.MontmostmonthMountmonkmount
mont
Did you mean "I'm waiting", "I am waiting", or "I was waiting"?I'm waitingI am waitingI was waiting
I waiting
 to receive, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 broken chairs and tables.

In my opinion your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 doesn't professional and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 service to customers, I prefer my money back and order to another This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
.

I hope This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and better service to your customer

My request is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible solve the problem

Yours sincerely


Possible spelling mistake found.TiarasArashKiaraMidrash
Kiarash
Possible spelling mistake found.ADAV
Fadavi

IELTS letter This is to report the problem

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American English

6 paragraphs

105 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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