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This is to report the problem

This is to report the problem RVqyk
Dear Mr Jone OR To whom it may concern This is to report the problem about my furniture, after received furniture in my home I saw some of Chairs and tables is broken, is bad situation for me. I am very sad because after seven mont I waiting to receive, now I have many broken chairs and tables. In my opinion your company doesn't professional and very bad service to customers, I prefer my money back and order to another company. I hope improve your company and better service to your customer My request is please soon as possible solve the problem Yours sincerely Kiarash Fadavi
Dear Mr
Jone


OR

To whom it may concern

This is to report the problem about my furniture, after received furniture in my home I
saw
some of Chairs
and tables
is broken
, is
bad
situation for me.

I am
very
sad
because
after seven
mont
I waiting
to receive,
now
I have
many
broken chairs and tables.

In my opinion your
company
doesn't professional and
very
bad
service to customers, I prefer my money back and order to another
company
.

I hope
improve
your
company
and better service to your customer

My request is
please
soon
as possible solve the problem

Yours
sincerely


Kiarash
Fadavi
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IELTS letter This is to report the problem

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  American English
6 paragraphs
105 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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