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Application for visitor visa

Application for visitor visa Oyp23
I, Gitaben Jayeshbhai Chauhan residing at 242, Valmikivas, Dhaman, Navsari 396 415, Gujarat, India and holding an Indian Passport No. : T2341239 issued on: 01-03-2016 Expire on: 28-02-2029 issued by Passport Office Surat, India. I would like to visit my maternal aunty Gitabahen Ramanbhai Chauhan who live in 26, Cottesmore Road, Leicester, LE 3LL, United Kingdom. As my uncle Ramanbhai Gopalbhai Chauhan had passed away on 9th September2021 due to Cancer in United Kingdom. His funeral was held at Gilroes Crenatorium, Groby Road, Leicester, United Kingdom on 16th September 2021. My aunty Gitaben Ramanbhai Chauhan living alone after the death of her husband and she don’t have any immediate relative in Leicester, United Kingdom. she need moral support from family in this current situation. My aunty Gitaben Ramanbhai Chauhan had a Son named Nikhil Ramanbhai Chauhan who is British Citizen and studying in London, United Kingdom. He left immediately after the funeral of his father. So, kindly issue me UK Visitor Visa so I can travel to UK and to be with my aunty for Support in this situation. Thanking You, (Gitaben Jayeshbhai Chauhan)
I,
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Gitaben
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Jayeshbhai
Chauhan residing at 242,
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Valmikivas
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Dhaman
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Navsari
396 415, Gujarat, India and holding an Indian Passport No.
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T2341239 issued on: 01-03-2016 Expire on: 28-02-2029 issued by Passport Office Surat, India.

I would like to visit my maternal aunty
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Gitabahen
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Ramanbhai
Chauhan who
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live
in 26,
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Cottesmore
Road, Leicester, LE 3LL,
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my uncle
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Ramanbhai
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Gopalbhai
Chauhan had passed away on 9th September2021 due to Cancer in
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United
Kingdom. His funeral
was held
at
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Gilroes
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Crenatorium
,
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Groby
Road, Leicester,
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Kingdom on 16th September 2021.

My aunty
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Gitaben
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Ramanbhai
Chauhan living alone after the death of her
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she
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don’t
have any immediate relative in Leicester,
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Kingdom.
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she
need moral support from family in this
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current
situation.

My aunty
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Gitaben
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Ramanbhai
Chauhan had a Son named Nikhil
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Ramanbhai
Chauhan who is British Citizen and studying in London,
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United
Kingdom. He
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left
immediately after the funeral of his father.

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So
, kindly issue me UK Visitor Visa
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so
I can travel to UK and to be with my aunty for Support in this situation.

Thanking You,

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IELTS letter Application for visitor visa

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
183 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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