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some countries are increasingly doing shopping online instead of going to stores . this letter will mention to benefits and drawbacks of online shopping. discuss about pros and cons

some countries are increasingly doing shopping online instead of going to stores. this letter will mention to benefits and drawbacks of online shopping. discuss about pros and cons Yd58K
Online shopping trend is becoming more and more popular and significantly increased compared to visiting stores. While there are numerous negatives to this trend, I believe the benefits exceed the drawbacks. One of the typical disadvantages of online purchasing is that the customers are directly checked the quality as well as tried products. Therefore, it is possible for consumers to buy fake or poor quality goods compared to adverbs or images provided on e-commerce platforms such as lazada, shoppe… Shipping costs can be very high, which is costly Online shopping saves time and effort, instead of traveling to a physical store, people just need to visit e-commerce sites and place an order. Moreover, all services are more convenient than ever, regardless of closing or operating hours. Shopping is available 24 hours a day, seven days a week, and all things are delivered to your house in a matter of days or even hours. Customers can easily compare products between different stores and enjoy competitive prices because online store does not have to pay the costs of running a shop and wages to salespeople or some of the other running costs of a real business world
Online shopping trend is becoming more and more popular and
significantly
increased compared to visiting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stores
. While there are numerous negatives to this trend, I believe the benefits exceed the drawbacks.

One of the typical disadvantages of online purchasing is that the customers are
directly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
checked
the quality
as well
as tried products.
Therefore
, it is possible for consumers to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
fake or poor quality
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
compared to adverbs or images provided on e-commerce platforms such as
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lazada
, shoppe… Shipping costs can be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
high, which is
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
costly


Online shopping saves time and effort,
instead
of traveling to a physical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
store
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
need to visit e-commerce sites and place an order.
Moreover
, all services are more convenient than ever, regardless of closing or operating hours. Shopping is available 24 hours a day, seven days a week, and all things
are delivered
to your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
in a matter of days or even hours. Customers can
easily
compare products between
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stores
and enjoy competitive prices
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
store
does not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
pay the costs of running a shop and wages to salespeople or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of the other running costs of a real business
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
world
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IELTS letter some countries are increasingly doing shopping online instead of going to stores. this letter will mention to benefits and drawbacks of online shopping. discuss about pros and cons

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  American English
3 paragraphs
194 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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