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Write a paragraph to introduce yourself (about 150-200 words)

Write a paragraph to introduce yourself (about 150-200 words) e3NpO
Hello! I am Tran Vu Ha Chi. My first name is Chi, and my last name is Tran. I was born and raised in Ha Giang. I spent 18 years living and studying in Ha Giang until I graduated high school. Now, as a 20-year-old girl, I am proud to be a student at Ha Noi Law University, which fulfills my dream to be a lawyer one day. Besides studying, I also own an online business in cosmetics since making myself and others beautiful is one of my hobbies. Talking about my character, I can say that I am responsible, hard-working, and patient. In addition, I often set myself goals and resolve to achieve them and I am also well trusted at work. Moreover, being a sociable person, I easily adapt to a new environment and get on well with others. Those are my strong points. By contrast, my drawbacks are self-deprecating and overly sensitive. I often feel worried and overthink when facing important situations. On the other hand, watching movies, listening to music, and doing yoga are my hobbies in my leisure time. Especially, I watch films and listen to music not only to relax but also to improve my English listening and speaking skills. I often watch movies with subtitles and watch their pronunciation, intonation then mimic them. I also often stand in front of the mirror to practice speaking to be more confident when communicating. For me, these are good and easy methods to learn and improve foreign language skills. In today's era, learning a foreign language well will help you a lot both in work and in life. It is everything I want to share about myself. Thanks for your attention.
Hello! I am Tran
Vu
Ha Chi. My
first
name is Chi, and my last name is Tran. I
was born
and raised in Ha
Giang
. I spent 18 years living and studying in Ha
Giang
until I
graduated
high school.
Now
, as a 20-year-
old
girl, I am proud to be a student at Ha
Noi
Law University, which fulfills my dream to be a lawyer one day.
Besides
studying, I
also
own
an online business in cosmetics since making myself
and others
beautiful
is one of my hobbies.

Talking about my character, I can say that I am responsible,
hard
-working, and patient.
In addition
, I
often
set myself goals and resolve to achieve
them and
I am
also
well trusted at work.
Moreover
, being a sociable person, I
easily
adapt to a new environment and
get
on well with others. Those are my strong points. By contrast, my drawbacks are self-deprecating and
overly
sensitive. I
often
feel worried and overthink when facing
important
situations.

On the other hand
, watching movies, listening to music, and doing yoga are my hobbies in my leisure time.
Especially
, I
watch
films and listen to music not
only
to relax
but
also
to
improve
my English listening and speaking
skills
. I
often
watch
movies with subtitles and
watch
their pronunciation, intonation then mimic them. I
also
often
stand in front of the mirror to practice speaking to be more confident when communicating. For me, these are
good
and easy methods to learn and
improve
foreign language
skills
. In
today
's era, learning a foreign language well will
help
you a lot both in work and in life.

It is everything I want to share about myself. Thanks for your attention.
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IELTS letter Write a paragraph to introduce yourself (about 150-200 words)

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
285 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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