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Write an email of about 150-200 words to your best friend, Joan, who is a professional event planner.

Write an email of about 150-200 words to your best friend, Joan, who is a professional event planner. 26j1X
Dear Joan, It has been such a long time since we last met. I hope you are doing well and had a great weekend. I am writing this letter regarding my parents’ anniversary. Before I have told you about this anniversary and I have been preparing for this occasion for a very long time. They are going to celebrate their 40th anniversary next month. This will be very important to our family since in our culture, the 40th anniversary is also called Ruby Wedding Anniversary. I know you are an expert in event planning and I really need your help. Would you please help me out with this? I know you will be very busy this week since you have just come back from Singapore and you have got lots of work at your office. You can get your jobs done first and we can meet up some time next week. We can then discuss further and you can advise me on how we can proceed. I look forward to your reply. Best Wishes
Dear Joan,

It has been such a long time since we last met. I hope you are doing well and had a great weekend. I am writing this letter regarding my parents’
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you about this
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anniversary
and I have been preparing for this occasion for a
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very
long time. They are going to celebrate their 40th
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anniversary
next
month. This will be
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very
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important
to our family since in our culture, the 40th
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anniversary
is
also
called Ruby Wedding
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Anniversary
. I know you are an expert in
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event
planning and I
really
need your
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help
. Would you
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please
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help
me out with this?

I know you will be
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very
busy this week since you have
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just
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come
back from Singapore and you have
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got
lots of work at your office. You can
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get
your jobs done
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first and
we can
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meet
up
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some
time
next
week. We can then discuss
further
and you can advise me on how we can proceed.

I look forward to your reply.

Best Wishes
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IELTS letter Write an email of about 150-200 words to your best friend, Joan, who is a professional event planner.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
173 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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