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Letter to Local magazine about the incorrect information of your town

Letter to Local magazine about the incorrect information of your town 7Wjdb

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the incorrect information that has been published in your latest magazine about my town called Noida in Northern part of India. In your July’s edition of a popular magazine on international travel, some misleading details haven been provided such as availability of metros and a functional airport. Both of these facilities are not currently available in this town and might be up and running from next year onwards. I would request you to correct these details as travelers might face difficulties while traveling to this place and complaint about incorrect information which would adversely affect your reputation and lead to confusion and inconvenience for tourists. I would suggest to publish accurate information in your next month’s edition. Furthermore, you can mention correct details on your online article about the same as many customers refer to your website for finding details about travel, accommodations and any other required information. I hope the above suggestions and information provided would be helpful. I would look forward to hearing from you. Yours failthfully Samantha Williams

Dear Sir or Madam,

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 customers refer to your website for finding You use this word too often, consider replacing it withminutiae
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Samantha Williams