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Introduce my self as a new student at mahasaraswati university

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Hello, let me introduce my self, My name is Ni Luh Putu Shintya Pradnyanita, iam eighteen years old, now i study at mahasaraswati university and my major is english education. My hobbies are playing traditional music, it's called gender, and i also like dancing balinese dance. I live at rahayu street number fourty. My motto is the more you earn, the more you earn. I choose mahasaraswati university because my near people who is have background study here, they are so amazing.
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Luh
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Putu
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eighteen years
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education. My hobbies are playing traditional music, it's called gender, and
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dance. I
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at
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rahayu
street number
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mahasaraswati
university
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my near
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background study here, they are
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IELTS letter Introduce my self as a new student at mahasaraswati university

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  American English
1 paragraphs
82 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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