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Letter about the healthy problem

Letter about the healthy problem qkmAd
Dear Joe, I was very grateful when I received your regards. I’m writing this letter to explain the reason I couldn’t take part in the summer camp yesterday. As you know, I encounter some problems with my health. On the way, I came back home after attending my brother's party. Unfortunately, I met with an accident with my motorbike. Then my motorbike pushed off the wall and I fell off the road. At that time, the sky was very dark, and it seemed that nobody was participating in traffic near there. I remembered that the night was 23 o’clock and still had me on my way. It is very scary that I really was shocked and needed a few minutes to calm down again. It is really fortunate that I still had scratches on my hand, feet but my face was swollen and bruised. I thought that I was going to die and that I was lucky that God prayed for me. The next morning, my father takes me to the hospital with a swollen face. The doctor said that I needed at least two weeks to get back to normal. Besides, they dressed the wound and prescribed some analgesic prescriptions. Don’t worry anymore, I will come back to the class when my health becomes better. Thank you very much! ! Yours sincerely, Quan
Dear Joe,

I was
very
grateful when I received your regards. I’m writing this letter to
explain
the reason I couldn’t
take part
in the summer camp yesterday.

As you know, I encounter
some
problems with my health. On the way, I came back home after attending my brother's party. Unfortunately, I met with an accident with my motorbike. Then my motorbike pushed off the wall and I fell off the road. At that time, the sky was
very
dark, and it seemed that nobody was participating in traffic near there. I remembered that the night was 23 o’clock and
still
had me on my way. It is
very
scary that I
really
was shocked
and needed a few minutes to calm down again. It is
really
fortunate that I
still
had scratches on my hand, feet
but
my face
was swollen
and bruised. I
thought
that I was going to
die
and that I was lucky that God prayed for me. The
next
morning, my father takes me to the hospital with a swollen face. The doctor said that I needed at least two weeks to
get
back to normal.
Besides
, they dressed the wound and prescribed
some
analgesic prescriptions.

Don’t worry anymore, I will
come
back to the
class
when my health becomes better.

Thank you
very
much! !

Yours
sincerely
,

Quan
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IELTS letter Letter about the healthy problem

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
223 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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