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Write a mail to the counterpart, reminding him/her to share the information with you at the earliest. Share reasons in terms of why the information required on priority.

Write a mail to the counterpart, reminding him/her to share the information with you at the earliest. Share reasons in terms of why the information required on priority. 6pAo3

Date: March 21, 2016 To: Leaseadministrator@company. com CC: LeaseadministratorMgr@company. com; Mymanager@company. com Sub: Closed store details || Mar 2016 (Follow up) Hi Lynnette, I am following up on the email Sent: Monday, March 16, 2016 7: 53 PM, regarding closed store details for the month of Mar’16, requested to be shared by 18th March. If you haven’t had chance to look into it yet, please work on to it on priority and provide me with the details at the earliest, as the payment rollout falls tomorrow, I have to calculate the rents and to see whether the payment to be released/hold for the closed stores. Also, I have to prepare write of entries and rent obligations for the closed stores and re

Date: March 21, 2016

To: Leaseadministrator@This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCom
com

CC: LeaseadministratorMgr@This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCom
com
; Mymanager@This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCom
com

Sub: You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlockedbankruptsealed
Closed
 store This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 || Mar 2016 (Follow up)

Hi Lynnette,

I am following up on the email This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
Sent
: The date March 16, 2016 is not a Monday, but a Wednesday.
Monday, March 16, 2016
 7: 53 PM, regarding You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlockedbankruptsealed
closed
 store This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 for the month of Mar’16, requested to be shared
 by 18th March.

If you haven’t had chance to look into it yet
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 work on to it on priority and provide me with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 at the earliest, as the payment rollout falls tomorrow, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 calculate the rents and to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 whether the payment to be released
/hold for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlockedbankruptsealed
closed
 stores.

Also
, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 prepare write of entries and rent obligations for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlockedbankruptsealed
closed
 stores and re