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Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: give some details about the job mention how you came across the job opportunity explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: give some details about the job mention how you came across the job opportunity explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend gLm1
Dear Sam, Hope you're getting on okay in London! . I am extremely excited to share some good news about a position in wildlife photography which really suits you well. Regarding the job, you need to travel across the world to collect the beautiful images of wild spices. Great news is that the company will bear all the travel, accommodation and food cost too. On top of that it also allows you to take another person with you if you are travelling to a different country. You can't believe it but timings are very flexible and you can choose your own time that too 6 working hours per day. Another benefit is you will get 10 days off in a month along with an unexpected huge salary with good incentives. As you know already that my father-in-law is planning to start a new business, he and his friends have decided to start a magazine. And it came to my notice that they are looking for a wildlife photographer, as soon as I heard I informed them about you and they agreed to take you in their company if you are ready to join. You really can't imagine how happy I felt in that situation. . . Believe me it is a perfect job for you because I'm the only person who knows how much you love about prography. So, this job will definitely show you the foot paths for your career. Moreover, it is also matching your travelling interest, so you can explore new places and show your talent to the world. What's more, the power of nature and it's beauty is in your hands. Just think and get back to me when you can. No Rush! Cheers, Ram
Dear Sam,

Hope you're getting on okay in London!
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I am
extremely
excited to share
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good
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news
about a position in wildlife photography which
really
suits you well.

Regarding the job, you need to travel across the world to collect the
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beautiful
images of wild spices. Great
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news
is that the
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company
will bear all the travel, accommodation and food cost too.
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also
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allows
you to take another person with you if you are travelling to a
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different
country. You can't believe it
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but
timings are
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very
flexible and you can choose your
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own
time that
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too 6
working hours per day. Another benefit is you will
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get
10 days off in a month along with an unexpected huge salary with
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good
incentives.

As you know already that my father-in-law is planning to
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start
a
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new
business, he and his friends have decided to
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start
a magazine. And it came to my notice that they are looking for a wildlife photographer, as
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soon
as I heard I informed them about you and they
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agreed
to take you in their
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company
if you are ready to
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join
. You
really
can't imagine how happy I felt in that situation.
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.
Don't put a space before the full stop
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Believe me it is a perfect job for you
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because
I'm the
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only
person who knows how much you
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love
about
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prography
.
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So
, this job will definitely
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show
you the foot paths for your career.
Moreover
, it is
also
matching your travelling interest,
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so
you can explore
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new
places and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
your talent to the world. What's more, the power of nature and it's beauty is in your hands.

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Just
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think
and
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get
back to me when you can. No Rush!

Cheers,

Ram
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: give some details about the job mention how you came across the job opportunity explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
288 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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