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Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer AGAX
Respected Sir, My name is Jaise an occupant in room 302. I am writing this letter to convey my dissatisfaction in the accommodation facility provided to me. I find it hard to share the room with other person. I have been residing in this facility for more than two weeks and find it difficult to share my space with another student. I lack concentration in my studies due to this arrangement. My room mate's style of learning and sleeping habits are becoming a disturbance for me. I also noticed some of my personal belongings are used without my permission and it is unacceptable behavior for me. I am unable to submit my projects and tests in timely manner due to this reason. I am writing this letter to draw your attention to this issue. Kindly do the necessary arrangements to shift my stay to a single room where I can move as soon as possible. I hope for a positive response. Yours Faithfully, Jaise
Respected Sir,

My name is
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Jaise
an occupant in
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room
302. I am writing this letter to convey my dissatisfaction in the accommodation facility provided to me. I find it
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hard
to share the
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room
with other person.

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I
have been residing in this facility for more than two weeks and find it difficult to share my space with another student.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
lack concentration in my studies due to this arrangement. My
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room mate
's style of learning and sleeping habits are becoming a disturbance for me. I
also
noticed
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some
of my personal belongings are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
without my permission and it is unacceptable behavior for me. I am unable to submit my projects and
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tests
in timely manner due to this reason.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing this letter to draw your attention to this issue. Kindly do the necessary arrangements to shift my stay to a single
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
where I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
as
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soon
as possible. I hope for a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Jaise
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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  American English
6 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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