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Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: describe the problem, say how long it has been a problem, explain what action you want the neighbor to take.

Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: describe the problem, say how long it has been a problem, explain what action you want the neighbor to take. qW0p
Dear Mrs Bright, This is your next flat neighbor Dammy, i am writing this letter to let you know about the consistent barking of your dog. Your dog has been consistently barking every night till about 1/2am for over a week now. The continuous night barking of your dog has put my family in an uncomfortable place because we find it hard to sleep peacefully and this is affecting my baby more, she now has a high fever as a result of less sleep at night. My husband now dose off at work also which made his boss issue him a query yesterday. I understand that this is a new habit of your dog. However, i would appreciate if you call in your veterinary doctor to come have a medical checkup on your pet so as to diagnose the reason for it’s sudden change in attitude and prescribe the necessary treatment required so it goes back to its normal cheerful and calm animal.
Dear Mrs Bright, This is your
next
flat neighbor
Dammy
,
i
am writing this letter to
let
you know about the consistent barking of your
dog
. Your
dog
has been
consistently
barking every night till about 1/2am for over a week
now
. The continuous night barking of your
dog
has put my family in an uncomfortable place
because
we find it
hard
to sleep
peacefully
and this is affecting my baby more, she
now
has a high fever
as a result
of less sleep at night. My husband
now
dose off at work
also
which made his boss issue him a query yesterday. I understand that this is a new habit of your
dog
.
However
,
i
would appreciate if you call in your veterinary doctor to
come
have a medical checkup on your pet
so as to
diagnose the reason for it’s sudden
change
in attitude and prescribe the necessary treatment required
so
it goes back to its normal cheerful and calm animal.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: describe the problem, say how long it has been a problem, explain what action you want the neighbor to take.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
163 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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