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Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it

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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you about the issues which I have been facing for the past two days while working from home. Thus, I apologized for the inconvenience caused in my roles and responsibility at my job. The virus definitions have been not updated on my laptop due to the limited connectivity issues at my home for the last seven days because the Wifi line is getting installed in my colony. However, I have informed the Wifi vendor to complete the installation as early as possible. Moreover, I am unable to finish up my work on time due to this issue. Although I am able to connect with the mobile hotspot, the internet bandwidth is not the same as the Wifi vendor. I am sorry for the delayed replies to the messages in the chatbox. I have already informed the IT department about the issue. Fortunately, they have responded to my query and I have to go to the office tomorrow for installing the latest virus definitions. I am apologizing in advance for tomorrow because I will be unable to complete the tasks on time. I am hoping that you will understand my problems which I faced during my work hours. I am looking forward to hearing from your soon. Yours sincerely, Shwatank Bhasin
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issues
which I have been facing for the past two days while working from home.
Thus
, I apologized for the inconvenience caused in my roles and responsibility at my job.

The virus definitions have been not updated on my laptop due to the limited connectivity
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issues
at my home for the last seven days
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the
Did you mean "Wi-Fi"? (This is the officially approved term by the Wi-Fi Alliance.)
Wifi
line is getting installed in my colony.
However
, I have informed the
Did you mean "Wi-Fi"? (This is the officially approved term by the Wi-Fi Alliance.)
Wifi
vendor to complete the installation as early as possible.

Moreover
, I am unable to finish up my work on time due to this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issue
. Although I am able to connect with the mobile hotspot, the internet bandwidth is not the same as the
Did you mean "Wi-Fi"? (This is the officially approved term by the Wi-Fi Alliance.)
Wifi
vendor. I am sorry for the delayed replies to the messages in the
Possible spelling mistake found.
chatbox
.

I have already informed the IT department about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issue
.
Fortunately
, they have responded to my query and I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
go to the office tomorrow for installing the latest virus definitions. I am apologizing in advance for tomorrow
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I will be unable to complete the tasks on time. I am hoping that you will understand my problems which I faced during my work hours.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am looking forward to hearing from
Did you mean "you're"?
your
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Shwatank
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Bhasin
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
218 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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