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The office you work in does not have any cafeteria for staff. Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff. In your letter, you should tell, what you heard about the inconvenience from the staff how you feel about it what suggestions you have about setting up a cafeteria

The office you work in does not have any cafeteria for staff. Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff. In your letter, you should tell, what you heard about the inconvenience from the staff how you feel about it what suggestions you have about setting up a cafeteria VR87
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to request you about opening a cafeteria for the staffs in our office. Firstly, some of the staff-members stay far away from the office. They usually miss their breakfast because they do not want to be late to work due to the traffic and the long distance. This results in their poor health, ultimately resulting in less work-output. Being their team leader, it becomes my responsibility to take care of my teams' health and work-goals. It really dishearten me to see them struggling on a daily basis. So, I held a meeting to ask them about their problems and after listening to them, I came to only one solution for all their concerns. I found out that everything will work out in the best way if they can get a breakfast or brunch inside or near to the office area. So after considering all the aspects, I finally came up with a few ideas. One of them was to convert the terrace storage room into a café as that room has not been used for a few years. The other option was to make a self-service café with basic equipment such as, a fridge and a microwave, a coffee machine and some ready to eat packed snacks. I know it seems that the fast food shop near the office building will seems convenient than the efforts of opening a cafeteria inside the building but, in the long run that will result in lot of waste of time because of the distance. Thank you for giving your time in reading this letter. I hope you consider these aspects and grant your permission. Yours Faithfully, Rup Chey
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter to request you about opening a cafeteria for the staffs in our office.

Firstly
,
some of the
staff-members stay far away from the office. They
usually
miss their breakfast
because
they do not want to be late to work due to the traffic and the long distance. This results in their poor health,
ultimately
resulting in less work-output.

Being their team leader, it becomes my responsibility to take care of my teams' health and work-goals. It
really
dishearten
me to
see
them struggling on a daily basis.
So
, I held a meeting to ask them about their problems and after listening to them, I came to
only
one solution for all their concerns. I found out that everything will work out in the best way if they can
get
a breakfast or brunch inside or near to the office area.

So
after considering all the aspects, I
finally
came up with a few
ideas
. One of them was to convert the terrace storage room into a café as that room has not been
used
for a few years. The other option was to
make
a self-service café with basic equipment such as, a fridge and a microwave, a coffee machine and
some
ready to eat packed snacks. I know it seems that the
fast
food shop near the office building will seems
convenient
than the efforts of opening a cafeteria inside the building
but
, in the long run that will result in
lot of
waste of time
because
of the distance.

Thank you for giving your time in reading this letter. I hope you consider these aspects and grant your permission.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Rup
Chey
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IELTS letter The office you work in does not have any cafeteria for staff. Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff. In your letter, you should tell, what you heard about the inconvenience from the staff how you feel about it what suggestions you have about setting up a cafeteria

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283 words
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