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Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: • give some details about the job • mention how you came across the job opportunity • explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

Dear Sana, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and in best spirit. I am writing to you to inform about great job opportunity which I came across. As when we last met you mentioned about that you want to shift your job as it is far from your house and also does not pay you enough. I recently read about the vacancy from a newspaper, which is near to your home and also is offering better salary package. The vacancy advertised is for the position of Assistant Professor in Biology department in DAV college. They are looking for the person having experience of 10 years, as per my knowledge you have more experience as required and also this will save your time which you use to spend to commute daily. It is an excellent opportunity and also I have some reference from the college which will help you to easily secure the position. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours Lovingly Xys

Dear Sana,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and in best spirit. I am writing to you to inform about great job opportunity which I came across.

As when we last met you Did you mean simply “mentioned that”? You do not need the word “about” here.mentioned that
mentioned about that
 you want to shift your job as it is far from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and also
 does not pay you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
. I recently read about the vacancy from a newspaper, which is near to your home and also
 is offering better salary package.

The vacancy advertised is for the position of Assistant Professor in Biology department in DAV college. They are looking for the person having experience of 10 years, as per my knowledge you have more experience as required and also
 this will save your time which you Make sure that ‘use to’ is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean ‘accustomed to’, use “used to”.used to
use to
 spend to commute daily. It is an excellent opportunity and also
 I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 reference from the college which will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you to easily
 secure the position.

Looking forward to your This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response.

Yours Lovingly


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Xys

IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: • give some details about the job • mention how you came across the job opportunity • explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

163 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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