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Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: • give some details about the job • mention how you came across the job opportunity • explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

Dear Sana, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and in best spirit. I am writing to you to inform about great job opportunity which I came across. As when we last met you mentioned about that you want to shift your job as it is far from your house and also does not pay you enough. I recently read about the vacancy from a newspaper, which is near to your home and also is offering better salary package. The vacancy advertised is for the position of Assistant Professor in Biology department in DAV college. They are looking for the person having experience of 10 years, as per my knowledge you have more experience as required and also this will save your time which you use to spend to commute daily. It is an excellent opportunity and also I have some reference from the college which will help you to easily secure the position. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours Lovingly Xys
Dear Sana,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and in best spirit. I am writing to you to inform about great job opportunity which I came across.

As when we last met you
mentioned about that
you want to shift your job as it is far from your
house
and
also
does not pay you
enough
. I recently read about the vacancy from a newspaper, which is near to your home and
also
is offering better salary package.

The vacancy advertised is for the position of Assistant Professor in Biology department in DAV college. They are looking for the person having experience of 10 years, as per my knowledge you have more experience as required and
also
this will save your time which you
use to
spend to commute daily. It is an excellent opportunity and
also
I have
some
reference from the college which will
help
you to
easily
secure the position.

Looking forward to your
positive
response.

Yours
Lovingly


Xys
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: • give some details about the job • mention how you came across the job opportunity • explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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