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You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting. In your letter, you should tell: • what you have done for the company in the year you worked there • what changes you would like to recommend • what training you require

Dear Mr Sharma, I am writing this letter to apprise about the topics I need to discuss with you tomorrow in the meeting. It has been 6 years I am working in the marketing department of this company and every year I made it assured that are strategies and targets should go hand in hand and because of this, the organisation have earned huge profits annually. As the new technology is getting updated daily we also need to pay attention to it. I would like to request you to that we should also start using digital marketing as a tool, comparatively it is cheaper and has wider reach. To implement this tool proper training will be required to perform better, I urge you that I am ready to start the training classes as soon as possible. Looking forward to your prompt response. Yours Faithully CJB
Dear Mr Sharma,

I am writing this letter to apprise about the topics I need to discuss with you tomorrow in the meeting.

It has been 6 years I am working in the marketing department of this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
and every year I made it assured that are strategies and targets should go hand in hand and
because of this
, the
Possible spelling mistake. ‘organisation’ is British English.
organisation
have earned huge profits
annually
.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
the new technology is getting updated daily we
also
need to pay attention to it. I would like to request you to that we should
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
using digital marketing as a tool,
comparatively
it is cheaper and has wider reach.

To implement this tool proper training will
be required
to perform better, I urge you that I am ready to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
the training classes as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.

Looking forward to your prompt response.

Yours
Possible spelling mistake found.
Faithully


CJB
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IELTS letter You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting. In your letter, you should tell: • what you have done for the company in the year you worked there • what changes you would like to recommend • what training you require

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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