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You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting. In your letter, you should tell: • what you have done for the company in the year you worked there • what changes you would like to recommend • what training you require

Dear Mr Sharma, I am writing this letter to apprise about the topics I need to discuss with you tomorrow in the meeting. It has been 6 years I am working in the marketing department of this company and every year I made it assured that are strategies and targets should go hand in hand and because of this, the organisation have earned huge profits annually. As the new technology is getting updated daily we also need to pay attention to it. I would like to request you to that we should also start using digital marketing as a tool, comparatively it is cheaper and has wider reach. To implement this tool proper training will be required to perform better, I urge you that I am ready to start the training classes as soon as possible. Looking forward to your prompt response. Yours Faithully CJB

Dear Mr Sharma,

I am writing this letter to apprise about the topics I need to discuss with you tomorrow in the meeting.

It has been 6 years I am working in the marketing department of this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and every year I made it assured that are strategies and targets should go hand in hand and because of this
, the Possible spelling mistake. ‘organisation’ is British English.organization
organisation
 have earned huge profits annually
.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 the new technology is getting updated daily we also
 need to pay attention to it. I would like to request you to that we should also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 using digital marketing as a tool, comparatively
 it is cheaper and has wider reach.

To implement this tool proper training will be required
 to perform better, I urge you that I am ready to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 the training classes as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Looking forward to your prompt response.

Yours Possible spelling mistake found.Faithfully
Faithully


CJB

IELTS letter You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting. In your letter, you should tell: • what you have done for the company in the year you worked there • what changes you would like to recommend • what training you require

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

144 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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